Sunday, November 22, 2009
School Transferred
It was last winter, the worst winter ever! I was thinking like that. The story was my parents said I have to transfer to another country and study at international school. When I was young, I never thought that I will transfer until I get scholarship and go oversea. I have to leave my entire good friend and my school. I was so nervous. The people in ISKL were not nice that I thought not every one). My classmates didn't talk with me, except we had to work in team. I used to eat lunch alone. I felt so lonely and angry. At that time, I missed my friends in Vietnam more than ever. I cried sometimes! I don’t want to talk with anyone about that or anything. When I came home, I just go to my room and doing my homework. I didn't tell my mom or dad! But in the end of 6th grade, my classmate began to talk with me more. Then I met Ayaka, Amalia, Anissa in my bus! We began to know each other and then we are good friends now. This year, I'm not shy anymore, now I become talkative! I know more friends from other class. I'm so happy now!
Friday, November 6, 2009
My Writing Re-Telling Myth Reflections
In my writing assignment about Re-Telling Myth story, I think my project show Thinking Creatively because I wrote my writing creative as much as I can. I used different verbs, strong verbs. I am proud of this piece of writing because I did try as best as I could and tried to search the strongest words I could find. I could do better do better by describing and being organized about the story. More detail about the point of view of my character. The most challenging of this assignment is how to use the writing to describe our character’s point of view and their expression in words. In this project( piece of writing) that I have to apply more about description and more strong verbs and be carful about my past, future tense in my next writing assignment.